After my tutorial Justin told me to make each brief either 2 or 4 pages depending on the amount of variation of work I have for each brief. This is because within the portfolio it would flow better, with each corresponding page being relevant. So for the safe sex brief I will be having four pages.
I feel after my tutorial this page is too cluttered, and I should also split it on to two pages, one have the branding and stationary, and the other having the t shirt, cap and poster in context.
I feel there is just too much going on within these two pages, so I will be splitting it up in to four pages. The 1st jsut having the branding on it, and then ending up with the final product. The the other two having photos and final sections of the final product. So it tells a story.
This is one of the 1st things I did on the course, and after my tutorial I agree that i do not think it is strong enough to put into my portfolio.
Again this needs to be split up in to two pages, the 1st one having jsut one images as the whole page, and the second page having two of the posters in context.
The layout of these pages works well I feel, so I wont be changing these.
The 1st page will be jsut kleenex in small letters in the middle of the page (the branding).. second page will be magazine page and poster in context.
The page is too busy and too much going on, I need to seperate it up a little within the page.
This is the 1st page I will be using, it will stay the same, apart from me missing out of the icons of a coffee cup, so I need 2 include that.
This is far too cluttered.
Over all, my 1st initial designs are getting there, but need to make the pages simpler and more concise. Even though I feel the branding at the bottom looks nice and colourful, I do agree after my tutorial that it distracts the eye, and also it should be consistent throughout the whole portfolio.
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